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Tuesday, 26 August 2014

Cross Country


E ako ana ahau ki te describe our feelings.

NGA HUA:
- I will start with I was so exhausted
- I will use adjectives (describing words)
- I will use adverbs (describe how I was doing something - ‘ly’ on the end)
- I will use similes ( compare two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’)

KAUA E WAREWARE:
- Capital letters
- Fullstops
When i was running i was so tired and so exhausted.When I was running around the whole block i was running two times and so incredibly puffed.
I had a red face and my legs were shaking.
At the end i was fanning my face and i was breathing and I was so thirsty.
I could bearly can not feel my legs or body as how i could never hear my heart beating.
My face was sweaty and I was shaking and so tired and exhausted.

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